A Lonely Yorkshireman

The contradicting ramblings of a sodding old fool

You rock!

with 10 comments

The way you move,
Your brilliant mind
The fall of your hair
Jade green eyes
Glistening smile
Your heart that cares

Hours go by
We talk, we laugh
Fingers caress
Kisses stop breath

Millennia pass
Tick doesn’t tock
Marry me!
Be my one
Forever rock my world!

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Written by lonelyyorkshireman

May 23, 2011 at 4:07 PM

10 Responses

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  1. Thanks for sharing, profound piece, well done,

    πŸ™‚

    Jingle

    May 26, 2011 at 1:39 PM

  2. Beautiful poem, how I wish I knew the feelings you’ve described. Elegantly eloquent.
    The Lonely Recluse.

    The Lonely Recluse

    May 26, 2011 at 6:49 PM

  3. Tender feelings illustrated well πŸ™‚

    clariice

    May 26, 2011 at 8:41 PM

  4. There is nothing more special than a rocking world, and this captures that sentiment beautifully!

    Helena (Hey!Lena)

    May 26, 2011 at 8:48 PM

  5. Ah…I like the tick doesn’t tock…cool Very good!

    pandamoniumcat

    May 27, 2011 at 4:23 AM

  6. Nice pacing, you rock people’s worlds with that poem (:

    CSExodus

    May 27, 2011 at 6:42 AM

  7. Beautiful sentiment.
    All blessing.

    meiro

    May 28, 2011 at 1:00 PM

  8. Oh, so romantic! I love “forever rock my world”!

    The Reason You Come

    May 28, 2011 at 3:50 PM

  9. Awww very sweet

    mindlovemisery

    May 28, 2011 at 8:09 PM

  10. Ahh…wonderful romance!
    I like “tick doesn’t tock”.

    Well done!

    Andy

    May 28, 2011 at 11:59 PM


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